Uchar Vichar
Mark Denis DSouza, Sharjah, India
12 Feb 2015
Only a poet or a writer blessed with wide and high imagination can create valuable literature,different from just writing.........keep up you have this qualities.
CGS Taccode, Mangalore, Ujjodi, India
12 Feb 2015
Beta ho tho aisa,Austin babu jaisa!
Alphonse Mendonsa, Mangalore, India
12 Feb 2015
Congrats Austin. wishing you all the success and one day sure you will be a great poet just like ur dad. keep up the good work
Stephen Masacrenhas, Bondel, India
12 Feb 2015
Yatha Raja Tatha Praja, Like Father Like Son, Kudos, one more daiji in the offing
Fr Victor DSouza, Mukamar, India
12 Feb 2015
Austin has a bright future. He gets proper guidance from his dad. He will be an as to konkni samaj. I wish Austine all the best.
Kishoo Barkur, Barkur, India
12 Feb 2015
ಬೋವ್ ಆಪುರ್ಬಾಯೆಚಿ ಕವಿತಾ ಕೆಲರಾಯ್ಚ್ಯಾ ರೊನಿ ಕ್ರಾಸ್ತಾಚಿ.
ಹಿ ಕವಿತಾ "ಆಲ್ತಾರ್ ಆನಿ ಚಾಮಾದೊರ್: ಕವಿತೆಕ್ ಜಾಪಿ ಪರಸ್ ಪೂರಕ್ ಮ್ಹಣ್ ಹಾಂವ್ ಲೆಕ್ತಾಂ.
ವೀಕ್ ವೊಂಪಿಜೆಚ್. ಫೊಂಡ್ ಖೊಂಡಿಜೆಚ್ ಮ್ಹಳ್ಳೆಂ ವೊಪ್ತಾನಾ, ಕವಿನ್ ಚಾಮಾದೊರಾಕ್ ಆನಿ ತಾಚ್ಯಾ ಕರ್ತುಬಾಂಕ್ ಬೋವ್ ಸೊಭಿತ್ ಥರಾನ್ ವಿಣ್ಗೆಂ ಕೆಲಾಂ.
ಕವಿತೆಚಿ ಸಂಪ್ಣಿ ನಿಜಾಯ್ಕಿ ultimate.
ರಾಬ್ಬಿ ತೊ ರಾಬ್ಬಿಚ್. ಕಿತ್ಲ್ಯಾ ಫಾರಿಜೆವಾಂನಿ ಮೊಸೊರ್ ಕೆಲ್ಯಾರಿ, ಖಂಯ್ಚ್ಯಾ ಜುದೆವಾಂನಿ ವಿಕ್ರಿತ್ ಕೆಲ್ಯಾರಿ ತೊ ಜೀವಂತ್ ಆಸ್ತಾನಾ ಕರುನ್ ಆಸಲ್ಲಿಂ ಆಜ್ಯಾಪಾಂ ತಾಚ್ಯಾ ಮರ್ಣಾ ಉಪ್ರಾಂತಯ್ ಕರೀತ್ ಲೊಕಾ ಕಾಳ್ಜಾಂ ಆಲ್ತಾರಿರ್ ರಾಜ್ ಕರುನ್ ಆಸಾ. ಹಜಾರ್ ಚಾಮಾದೊರೀ ತಾಚೆಂ ಕಿತೆಂಚ್ ಕರುಂಕ್ ಪಾಂವ್ಚೆನಾಂತ್.
ರೊನಿಕ್ ದೇವ್ ಬರೆಂ ಕರುಂ.
ಕಿಶೂ ಬಾರ್ಕೂರ್
Maxim, Bangalore,
07 Feb 2015
Beautiful Wilma....
Alphonse Mendonsa, Abu Dhabi, India
06 Feb 2015
hi Wilma,
After a long time I read your kavita. It really very meaningful and your imagination is beyond imagination. Great work, very nicely narrated. Yes unfortunately today there are hardly any Thalte in our fields just like our old grand parents under whom we used to seek warmth. all the best for future poems
wilson, kateel, india
06 Feb 2015
ek aapurbaayechi kavitha.
hyaa kavithek mosthu disha asath.... maka pishar ghalem hya kavithen.... superb wilma
Hemacharya, Mangalore, India
31 Jan 2015
I remember Samanvaya Fr Rony Coutinho enacting dis song when we were in primary school. It has a good tune too.
Nery, Mira Road,
25 Jan 2015
Kaljak ani manak apudchi apurbaichi kavita. Aslyo Kavita Boraite rav....Jaison
Mitra Seema Manerkar, Goa, India
21 Jan 2015
Sunder kavita bareyela.ashich bereyat rave.
Nagesh Sonde, Mumbai, India
21 Jan 2015
काळजांतल्यान बरयिलि कविता, जें जास्त कांयि सांगून वता, अंकल बरो किं वायट, हो प्रश्नो महत्वाचें न्हंय, महत्वाचें जे तरेन मोग करचें पोळोवचांतु येता. दर एक अंकल वायटूचि आसता ? हो प्रश्नो विचारचें आवश्यक आसता
Usha Dhond Malkernekar, Goa, India
20 Jan 2015
Very well written, child's emotions rather a plea for help. Child melestetion is a real problem any where you go in the world but when it comes to incest, adults don't know how to deal with it and the normal reaction is to deny it. Children should be taught about such predators and adults should listen to the child. I think this poem itself should be used to teach the children w/out having to even talk about sex which is uncomfortable subject for many.
Sunita Prasad, Goa, India
20 Jan 2015
Very sad.The poem perfectly express the death of innocence. Whom we trust and whom not to! I did write one after watching the movie" Highway" I was so overwhelmed! We seriously need to bring awareness among our children related to good touch and bad touch.
How it feels
To be caged
Within one's walls
Among the blood?
That silence
Which echoes
Like swirling waves
When the invisible ghosts
Pounce
In the darkness,
Residing within those walls
Which once sheltered
A fragile Innocence ...
Durga Das Kane, Goa, India
20 Jan 2015
Ame bhurgyacher vishvas daurunk jai .they should feel to share with us everything
Swathi Bhobe, Goa, India
20 Jan 2015
Very beautiful described the unpleasant truth which many young minds and bodies have to go through. Very touchy subject too, a taboo to most people even to discuss.
Ramesh Ghadi, Goa, India
20 Jan 2015
Sad ..bitter but a reality ...
Still our innocent people are not aware about this new addition of 'Uncles '...a good eye opener from poet..on otherwise un disclosed subject .
Congratulations .
Vaman Sinai Khandeparkar, Goa, India
20 Jan 2015
Kharench kaljak bhidpi kavita.Superb.
Anant Bhat, Kochi, India
20 Jan 2015
वायट काम बरी रीतीन, काव्यरूपान बरेयलां | देवु बरें करो !
Damodar Keshav Kamath Ghanekar, Goa, India
20 Jan 2015
All uncles are not molesters... some are real Uncles...
Unnati Mandrekar, Mandre, Goa, India
19 Jan 2015
आंग शिरशिरलें..... चलयेचे जिणेंत एकदां तरी तिका नाका आशिल्ल्या स्पर्शाचो अणभव आयिल्लो आसताच. तोखणाय चलयेची आनी कवितेची
Uday Mhambro, Goa, India
19 Jan 2015
One of the best poems. Supriya is a winner at Kavita Fest 2015 at Barkur, Udupi.
Sakharam Sinai Borkar, Goa, India
19 Jan 2015
Too good! Keep it up! barait rav!
Ramesh Bhagvant Veluskar, Goa, India
19 Jan 2015
सुप्रिया ग्रेट! तुजी कविता जिती आसा. आनी जितेंपण उतरांनी स्पश्ट करपाक खूप कठीण. जगपांतलें तें जितेपण तुवें सहज व्यक्त केलां. ही कोंकणींतली एक सुंदर कविता आसा. खरें म्हटल्यार कविता फेश्तांत तुवें ही कविता सादर करूंक जाय आसली. दर एका मनशााच्या काळजाच्या कंवळेपणाक स्पर्श करपाची ताकद आसलेली ही कविता आसा.
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